#050 Oops

Another one of those pages that I totally gutted the dialog and redid it after I actually drew the page. Sometimes you really just can’t tell what’s going to make the most sense until after you have the visual. I mean, I knew that Kets was going to be there the whole time and eating the same fruit, but I originally wrote it so that Kets wasn’t acknowledged much in this scene. Changing the last line from “You didn’t know?” to “Neither of you knew?” made a lot more sense once I had the visual staring me in the face.

I also need to leave more room for text, I swear…