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#124 Defend Your Honor

Some days, I am amazed when an half a page of text can be boiled down to just two panels on a page. I thought this one was going to need to be four. I blocked it out a couple of times before realizing that, hey, their expressions and movement are not vital at all to the conversation. In fact, the only two vital things I absolutely need to show were camp being set up with everyone in the frame and Kets clinging to June. Everything else, the dialog said well enough.

Keep it simple.

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